Treasure Island

Valsa George


Simple Verse. No.9. Love at First Sight


A spark lit through presence
Fanned through glance
Brightened through absence
Blazed through romance
Steadied through alliance
Tested through defiance
Weakened through silence
Oft extinguished through clash

Submitted: Monday, February 10, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, February 11, 2014

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  • Dinesh Nair (2/16/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    Love at first sight is after all either blind or beyond reason
    If accepted, it is a folly of prudence
    And if and when rejected it is a bubble of despair...
    Love after many a sight has no tale to tell either....
    If culminated in matrimony, it is a convention trespassed
    And if extended without that, it is a conviction imbibed.

    A simple verse for a high cause. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/11/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    Wow... A wonderful poem with beautiful rhymes. Beautiful way you have described love at first sight with few lines..
    Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

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