Valsa George

Simple Verse. No.9. Love At First Sight - Poem by Valsa George

A spark lit through presence
Fanned through glance
Brightened through absence
Blazed through romance
Steadied through alliance
Tested through defiance
Weakened through silence
Oft extinguished through clash

Comments about Simple Verse. No.9. Love At First Sight by Valsa George

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (2/16/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    Love at first sight is after all either blind or beyond reason
    If accepted, it is a folly of prudence
    And if and when rejected it is a bubble of despair...
    Love after many a sight has no tale to tell either....
    If culminated in matrimony, it is a convention trespassed
    And if extended without that, it is a conviction imbibed.

    A simple verse for a high cause. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (2/13/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    Consummately defined - an elegant summary. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,527 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/12/2014 7:58:00 PM)

    Extinguishing may also be caused by reticence. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,679 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/12/2014 10:53:00 AM)

    Simply great love at first sight expressed so delicately..........Valsa............ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,679 Points Valerie Dohren (2/11/2014 11:07:00 AM)

    Short, succinct, well said. Love at first sight doesn't always last. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/11/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    Wow... A wonderful poem with beautiful rhymes. Beautiful way you have described love at first sight with few lines..
    Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,806 Points Savita Tyagi (2/11/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful! A walk through the mysterious world of love. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (2/11/2014 3:16:00 AM)

    all its hues and shades, very well brought out. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,177 Points Kee Thampi (2/11/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    touch of a soul mate.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 11, 2014

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