~silence~ Poem by Shahzia Batool

~silence~

Rating: 5.0


Thoughts bled
Words did not descend on mind
I scribed silence on a blank page!

Monday, December 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 December 2014

Dark and deliciously versive, ole' friend! ~FjR~ Thought I'd make my every other year pit-stop here for a month or two....

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Lyn Paul 29 December 2014

Silence...... with no thought, should be more. Enjoyed Shahzia. Thank you

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Muhammad Ali 28 January 2015

. . . . . (silence i also share)

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Muhammad Ali 28 January 2015

. . . . . (silence i also share)

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Ramesh Rai 09 January 2015

Your silence is more powerful. Thanks for sharing

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Kavya . 07 January 2015

ah! wat a meaningful silence! njoied

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Yasmin Khan 03 January 2015

Ah! how many times it happens. I wish there'd be some other language to scribe silence, more eloquent than words. Your two-lined verse conveys the theme so well. We can read your mind in these brief but eloquent verse. ''Brevity is the soul of wit.''

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