hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 54,746 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Shy Nature - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

My friend is of shy nature
May not like a word to utter
If that is not needed
May shake head if advice is heeded

He is brilliant in study and quite intelligent
He lives in real world and believes in present
“Why one should not be fully alive to the situation”?
He may surpass me sometimes with such question

As little shyness makes him handicap
He is blessed with ideas to tap
With resources and come out with scheme
That proves so beneficial for all of them

I made bone of no contention
As we had strong relation
He was as near as possible
I would always want him out of trouble

He was daily going down from his nature
I wanted to make it sure
He did not name any botheration
But I feared his strained relation

He was finding very hard to pull on
She was outraged at him and gone
He was left alone to face loneliness
That was clearly visible on his face

I tried to persuade him in smooth manner
I considered her wife as my sister
She will never compromise with her stand
She will not hesitate to go even to dead end

I managed the situation and cooled her off
My friend heaved a sigh and had last laugh
He was trying to come out off set field
The same position he did want now to yield



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Comments about Shy Nature by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:43:00 AM)

    aryan choudhary3 hours ago
    amazing, wonderful, good poem and please checkout my poem 'out in space'.i hope you will love it.
    Comment +1
    great meaning (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:42:00 AM)

    Divya Lakshmi Pillai2 hours ago
    too rhyming and too good
    Comment +1
    amazing poem but shy nature. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:42:00 AM)

    Arielle Te3 hours ago
    I like it..
    Comment +1
    poignant (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:41:00 AM)

    Mark Brindamour3 hours ago
    the story, it sounds like one I know...
    Comment +1
    ok (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:40:00 AM)

    Nash Thomas3 hours ago
    open mind, constant urge and positive thinking only only find solution for growth (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    Paul3 hours ago
    you're a good friend
    Comment +1
    Pretty Amazing!


    Arielle Te3 hours ago
    I like it..
    Comment +1
    poignant (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    aryan choudhary3 hours ago
    amazing, wonderful, good poem and please checkout my poem 'out in space'.i hope you will love it.
    Comment +1
    great meaning (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    My friend is of shy nature
    May not like a word to utter (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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