Severe Fire Poem by ramesh rai
Severe Fire
Fire can burn every thing
Except Mica or alike
Flame of fire is anguish of nature
When she devolves to extreme point
Fire is cooled down in contact with water
Fire breaches all contract and assignment
Fire is rude, evolves through anger
Still fire is sacred and auspicious
It has a kind relation with heat and light
Travel equally with its journey
There is one more severe Fire
That can burn the soul even
Though Soul is immortal
As it's said, yet wrath of human power
Is more severe to burn the creation
But soul is defaced with its flame
And victim is self the person, none other
So let your temper be cooled down
And rest in passive state
Severe Fire can sever all relation.
Is more severe to burn the creation How true, I could agree souls might be able to burn themselves when full of hate. I guess true creation comes mostly from hearts filled with love.
such a marvelous fiery poetry... can come only from the likes of thee..... you come after almost na year but see many still read ye... Share your vision and lovely poetry... with folks like me FIRE to extinguish all hate may become ye
The fire of anger and bitterness is destructive to all it touches. There is fire in passionate pursuits but it needs to be tempered by selflessness or it too can turn destructive. Excellent write!
I also do agree with @Elena Sandu's comment that 'true creation comes mostly from hearts filled with love'. What a nice thought!
A poem of deep thought, of self realization. '...yet wrath of human power Is more severe to burn the creation But soul is defaced with its flame And victim is self the person, none other' - I fully agree.
Creative way of pointing, i like the expression of your thought using fire as medium of translating concept and ideas..fire can burn sanity, and lets pour water to anybody that get angry....hope the fire gone and if not..it getting bigger hahahahahahaha..joking!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Flame of fire is anguish of nature and fire can burn anything. Anger is a vice and just like violent fire that destroys anythings and spoils status of humanity. Soul is immortal and to burn soul's sin fire of wisdom of spiritual nature is necessary. Wonderful comparative poem is shared here....10