Jim Milks

Rookie - 0 Points (2/7/1966 / Boston)

Seasons: Haiku - Poem by Jim Milks

Spring: Haiku
Life awakening
Flower opens in the sun
A world is reborn

Summer: Haiku
Warm sun on the ground
A flower growing stronger
Life under the sun

Fall: Haiku
Darkening Shadows
Flower drifts to gentle sleep
The world is resting

Winter: Haiku
Blankets of cold white
Flower hidden from the cold
Life waiting for spring

© JPM 11/13/08

Comments about Seasons: Haiku by Jim Milks

  • Silver Star - 4,133 Points Nhien Nguyen (5/3/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    I liked this poem so I decided to translate it into Vietnamese and I also wrote it in Haiku format. NHIEN NGUYEN (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (9/16/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    A fine line of haikus. You've done a good job. Enjoyed each one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,605 Points * Sunprincess * (6/26/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    ..........the flower is one of the most special creations of the cosmos....enjoyed... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 195 Points Greg Davidson (2/23/2013 7:27:00 PM)

    I like them. It so so nice to see that poets still acknowledge the traditional form in more than just the syllable count. Beautifall images. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrea Blodgett (2/5/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    There is one line in it that has eight syllables instead of seven, it's the Fall Haiku and the second line. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 5, 2009

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