Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 8,743 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Scenery - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Sitting on sea shore
So cool and calm wind blowing
Unknowing of whats happening around.
Very far away somewhere in horizon
I could see the pretty golden coloured
Sun looking like a bride glowing all over.
Blushing with a orangish glow
entering the grooms chamber
after pausing each steps.
It seems that sea is eagerly for brides arrival.
Slowly and slowly darkness creeping in
Cool breeze blowing
All of a sudden
The two hands from some where it came
Suddenly covered my eyes
With a sudden blow I got up
It was my friends who played the mischief
They went for swimming leaving me on shore.
I forgot myself that I am on seashore.


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© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Imagination..

Comments about Scenery by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/22/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    I like your rhythm, so unusual and melancholic! ! ! ! And always a surprise at the end. Very beautiful Poetess! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 749 Points Shahzia Batool (9/19/2013 12:03:00 PM)

    this is the live example of God's real scenery being so creatively imitated by the art of poetry with a feel in it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/19/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    Glory to be the God nice scenery (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 2, 2014


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