Say Yes Once More Poem by sekharan pookkat

Say Yes Once More

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Rolled the images
One by one around her
Many of them were clear
And others were faint.

In the last thunder yelled
More moments of friendship
Whistled to share
The cracked limbs again.

Drowned in the crowd
Along the rolled images
One by one around her
Sorry to say ‘yes ‘once more.

Tuesday, June 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True friendship is for ever
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very breezy regret, friends are friends it all matters how we accept them without much expectations, any relationship we should learn to accept as it us and appreciate only the best, let the weaknesses be sublime nit in the limelight, cute work thanks for the share poet

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Can't claim I understood this poem inspite of your note above. Yet, it has a sweet charm of its own and that is all what we expect of poetry. Brilliant lines.

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2016

In the last thunder yelled More moments of friendship whistled share The cracked limbs again- - -Beautiful lines reminiscing old friendship.

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 June 2016

friends are my strength and weakness

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 June 2016

Hi Sekharan, In the last thunder yelled more moments of friendship The lines touched my heart, not like a yell of the thunder, but but like the soft untouching touch of a feather, of tiny unseeable breeze. Thank you Sekharan.

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Sekharan Pookkat 14 June 2016

nature has its own ways to disclose with us

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