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My Gift

Backwaters whispered in my ears
A song of lust, love and lustrous
Palm leaves repeated the lines
To exchange a gift for my Princess

She was moving with her friends
Towards the holy altar
In a chariot of ivory
To show her beauty and majesty.

Her heyday of youth
Made my old lyre active
And played the primordial symphony
To prove my utter poorness

Backwaters whispered in my ears
The ring finger should not be empty
On the eve of rendezvous
And remembered for ever.

We yelled on her arrival at the holy daises
And stood for a moment and exchanged a ring
Half gold and half silver
As a token of my love and fondness.

Mountains smiled slightly pouring snow
Dale hugged in surprise with flowers
Sky screened in blue with rainbow
Wind embarrassed me slightly and tightly

Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013


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For a friendship day

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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/16/2013 9:30:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem of friendship and love.
    'Her heyday of youth
    Made my old lyre active'
    And you played the symphony so well!

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  • Beauteous Victory (11/11/2013 1:53:00 PM)

    What an amazing piece! Cheers!

  • Thomas A Robinson (8/30/2013 1:53:00 AM)

    Sounds to be much more than friendship.

  • Zandile Zoya (8/29/2013 12:33:00 AM)

    lovely poem girl... big up to you # i like

  • David Wood (8/27/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    A deep poem with lovely lines expressing friendship.

  • Hazel Durham (8/23/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    With great depth of feelings so beautifully expressed for friendship day!

  • Valsa George (8/23/2013 1:27:00 AM)

    The love song played on your lyre is beautiful and the exchange of ring has sealed the bond! !

  • Shalini Samuel (8/22/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    Backwaters whispered in my ears
    The ring finger should not be empty/// what a touching and lovely line.. it melts my heart and whispers don't forget to comment..thanks for your wonderful words on my new poem.. thanks a lot

  • Vizard Dhawan (8/22/2013 7:57:00 PM)

    a great friendship poem and a well versed msg too
    enjoyed reading it

  • Heather Wilkins (8/22/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    very good poem well written enjoyed

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