Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,910 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Sail Away - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

I sail towards the sun
until nighttime falls
then I sail with the
wind and the sea

Where ever it takes me
I know I will be free


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I spelt where ever like this,
I know there is wherever,
I really don't know which is right,
if it matters at all.

Comments about Sail Away by Dave Alan Walker

  • Silver Star - 3,261 Points Smoky Hoss (10/23/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Amen my brother! ! ! Amen. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 471 Points Patti Masterman (5/29/2012 12:44:00 PM)

    I think I would make wherever one word..if indeed I could still care..after wind had taken me..somewhere. ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (5/27/2012 5:17:00 PM)

    Wherever what matters, not at all, keep sailing towards the sun Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (5/27/2012 12:40:00 PM)

    if you need help hoisting the sail, let me know! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,349 Points Unwritten Soul (5/27/2012 9:34:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem, one of prettiest in your collection. anout your note: wherever or where ever is no matter to me...when where sail it meets ever so it became wherever hahaha. whatever or what ever it is i love this piece_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 27, 2012



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