Sad Square Of Blue Poem by Susy Evelyne

Sad Square Of Blue

Rating: 4.5


A birthday has come
With no one to fill it.
On the calendar it lies,
Outlined; a sad square of blue.

Like a pool, still,
Waiting for someone to come
And dive in.
Or a glass vase that has held
Many a lovely rose
But today holds none.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written spring 2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 28 November 2013

Your poem is beautiful! Sad, void, feelings. 'Or a glass vase that has held Many a lovely rose But today holds none.' Touched me.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 October 2013

Sad but a very lovely write, one can feel the loneliness and the truthfulness it conveys, Beautiful.

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