Room Of Gloom Poem by Asif Baloch
Room Of Gloom
I laugh when they laugh
I sing to kill my feelings
A smile with so much tears
Drizzle like rain silently
Inside
I want but I can’t get
A love which did forfeit
Left me on the venomous thorns
To glide
Once injuries now become scars
Left by painful thoughts
Thoughts of loneliness
And no one by
My side
Giggles and laughs in the air
Echos and explodes in my head
Tearing and ripping my soul a part
Forcing me on the flames
To ride
There is someone at the door
Trying to open and enter the gloom
Room of gloom where I hide
Covering my face and
Silently cry
Classic poem, depicts the loneliness in every one; a gloom behinds those smiles. Maybe by letting someone enters into our room of gloom, the darkness will turn into light and happiness will be found! A 10.
Asif Bhayya, this poem has great depths, the right tone, apt words and created successfully the required mood......terrific.....10
deep thoughts...let see..it implied like this.. lonely as can be lets hide not to see inert feeling to beguile smile for a while Ency Bearis
this fine piece actually teleported me to the inner acquifer...filled with emotional brine
Is the room of gloom waiting there? Are we going to enter? Lovely and touchy composition. 10 from me.
open your gloomy room out, Aijaz...much fresh air and dazzling light waiting there to enter...A well written poem on frustrating lonely feels...10
Eloquent.....painfully beautiful........and thoughtful indeed.......10+
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4/25/2024 8:12:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Wonderful craft of writing! So sad poem of loneliness! 10 for this piece.