Rain Of Love Poem by Asif Baloch
Rain Of Love
Asif! I have spended the life in this yearn
That someday the rain of love
Will drizzle on me too
Today again I felt
Someone near
Dreamy fragrance as
She was here
The one with whom
I use to dance
In the land of rainbows
And love filled sounds
Alas! Today again
I did cried
Smiled sadly and gathered
Broken desires
As I picked the pieces
Of shattered dreams
Become lost and hurt
As pain rose from the
Core of spine
As I tear a tear
There what I found
A lost child
Longing for motherly love
And desperate to
Reach the tender womb
I like how you used rain in equating love, we all suffer at one time or another.
an eloquent composition about rain and its blessing...Had a lovely read...Thanks! ! !
May be i m lucky enough to get some Drops from you Love Rain :) Great work..10.10.10
I wish I could wave a magic wand so your dream could come true. Such yearning is extremely well expressed in another excellent poem of yours......Karin Anderson
Lovely title. We all need love to survive.10 for your gifted pen. Warm regards, Sandra
rain is a bless as well as a bliss.. that's really a great verse, i like it..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Smiled sadly and gathered Broken desires As I picked the pieces Of shattered dreams good lines. I really enjoyed this I think it is very good! ! ! great job my friend. Becca