Revolutions Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Revolutions

Rating: 5.0


The first touch among
The many that will follow
Is the most painful
But perhaps it is the last
That will leave me here
Broken and bleeding out
Onto what little floor
That can still hold me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
without a name Face 22 August 2011

it's very sad. why would they leave you? i cannot understand.... It's a beautiful poem all the same, very good. :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 August 2011

Renaissance of poetry thorugh your revolutions here.Nice thinking.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 August 2011

Beautiful. So many untold takes the root to meet with passion. Fantastic. Yes, the floor never betrays but we can't keep our promise. Regards, pranab 10++

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