Remember Bali Poem by Ave Lilik

Remember Bali



Remember Bali-
of you and me
and the fields of paddy
in Ubud's glory?

Remember Nanggu-
and the sea so blue
you were gazing through
and how i picture you?

Remember the Lagoon-
how you sang in the moon
how we were in tune
and it rained so soon?

Remember Novotel-
the heaven we dwell
and dreams they sell
how come it's farewell?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 01 November 2005

I've been to Ubud and to the Borders Bookstore in Friendship Heights. I wish your poem had conveyed more of the specialness of Bali or what happened to you there. Regards.

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