Remain Touchy Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Remain Touchy
What must be said about poet?
When he is at work and very alert
Keeps moving with revolutionary thoughts
And takes full precaution not to be caught
Still it leaves with lots of ground
Some of the thoughts are not found
They are missing originality
Readers pick it up as bad quality
It is often pointed out bluntly
So the poet becomes aware and rectifies suitably
It has no tone of insult
But readers and poet’s relation remain well built
You may have different view points on poverty
You may express it as fallen grace of almighty
The poet may paint it as grace of almighty
A phase not to remain permanent but temporary
Same way beautiful ready may be compared
He has the imagination and openly dared
Many may praise out right and others may condemn
But after all he is the poet and has thought power to turn
Well, that shall always remain
So long humanity suffers with pain
Feels agony and goes out with sympathy
Each individual feels about it and remains touchy
ok Dan down23 minutes ago need to work on the rythmn and flow
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What a poem Levi Domingos18 minutes ago Powerful and amazing piece of art well done indeed Comment +1
awww Sarah Busch25 minutes ago awww i love it i know how that feels
the poet Bridget Dunst22 minutes ago Makes you feel like poets are the underdog in the world of writing, and that they have to prove their worth. Comment +1
Good Ayrton Pinto20 minutes ago I liked the imagery in the poem. However it felt like the rhythm and rhyme were to forced making it lose some of its edge. i wish you luck with further writings. Comment +1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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What must be said about poet? When he is at work and very alert