Reality Poem by Indira Renganathan

Reality

Rating: 5.0


A three year old
Scents his dad's deed well

When the little boy cries aloud
Dad beats his wife
She starts crying and the boy stops
When the boy stops, he's beaten
Is it somebody should be crying?

Mom cuddles her son
Says 'even a thundering sky cries
by sun's burning blaze
Even the earth cries of drought
By sun's burning blaze
Sun can do anything

Then the little boy asks
'Who's the sky?
Who's the earth? '

Mom says'whoever cries louder'
Boy asks
'Who cries longer is what? '
Mom says 'mom'
'cause Earth is our mother

Boy says
'Ma, I'm your son
And son alone..
Never the sun

Friday, June 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 July 2020

I see a philosophical undertone in your poem which deals with two situations comparing them eloquently and wisely. Superb poem......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2020

Who's the earth? ' Mom said'whoever cries louder' Boy asks 'Who cries longer is what? ' Mom says 'mom' 'cause Earth is our mother.......I found these lines are much impressive having outstanding conceptualization. What a great poem! 10

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 June 2020

This poem is full of wisdom..... Great

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