Real Torture Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Real Torture

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Real torture
Wednesday, February 5,2020
9: 32 AM


She had something else
and remained tense
not for our happy union
but for her new find and companion

why did she prefer?
and offer
her life for the exchange of treasure
i remained totally unsure

she had fancy ideas
so made repeated pleas
to go away from me
like bird totally free to fly

where her promises had gone?
what wrong had I done?
was she not looked after well?
she had nothing more to tell

today she has been turned down
her fate has remained unknown
I heard her saying "I mistreated "
it made me totally upset

how come one woman can accuse?
when she herself had refused
to stay with willingness
some dark lines appear on my face

Hasmukh Mehta

Real Torture
Wednesday, February 5, 2020
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 February 2020

Empathize with the hurt in the lines. Can understand what it feels when a loved one accuses... TFS. Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Feb 06,2020

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 February 2020

Some dark lines appear on face and such things provoke thought. This poem is very brilliantly penned.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2020

how come one woman can accuse? when she herself had refused to stay with willingness some dark lines appear on my face Hasmukh Mehta

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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