Random Thought Ill (On Relationship) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thought Ill (On Relationship)

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No matter how hard we try
Some desires stay unfulfilled
Some work left undone
Some relationship painfully destroyed
Some pride hurt, some integrity tarnished
Better to be happy and satisfied
With whatever little our gains are
And be thankful for life and its provide


This fear and distrust of fellow being
Encroaching upon our psyche
A parasite amorphous spread wide
Destroying the love and trust
That builds the human life.

Angry words cut cleaner than sword
No tearing of flesh and no blood to spill
Yet heart is cut like grass under scythe

Friday, August 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 29 August 2014

Angry words cut cleaner than sword No tearing of flesh and no blood to spill Yet heart is cut like grass under scythe Wounds heal out but words are kept if not in conscious in the under ground stores of memory. A thoughtful write.

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Bharati Nayak 27 September 2016

Angry words cut cleaner than sword No tearing of flesh and no blood to spill Yet heart is cut like grass under scythe - - - - -Anger is man's worst enemy and causes most harm to human relationship. A wise and wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 28 September 2016

Thank you Bharati for reading and commenting. Appreciate it very much.

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Chuy Amante 13 September 2014

Love and angers they are strangers Be, act in love Be the White Dove

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 September 2014

Fantastic lines...... Angry words cut cleaner than sword No tearing of flesh and no blood to spill Yet heart is cut like grass under scythe Beautiful poem...Very true said, our dreams may nor may not remain fulfilled. Still we should be happy with what ever we have..Angry words can cut ones heart so deep and blood wont be seen outside. So painful it is. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

We cannot be happy if we wait for everything to be in the manner we desire. Much will be left incomplete, much may happen contrary to our expectations! Still there is much more to be rejoiced over! Great thoughts

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2014

Better to be happy and satisfied With whatever little our gains are Beautiful lines for all to follow. Satisfaction is the key to a peaceful life.

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