Rain (Senryus) Poem by Sandra Martyres
Rain (Senryus)
1. The Rain Gods relent
Opening the heavens flood gates
To water the earth
2. Children love the rain
Just splashing in the puddles
Their favourite game
3. Barefoot in the rain
But beggars do not complain
No rain means more pain
Linking these poems up with the theme of Rain is admirable. The Gods, children and beggers all take part in your Senryu but in different roles. Great imagination.! 10 Karin Anderson
Sun, water and air, the most important elements for soil to play with. God knows that and sends the rain. A beautiful imagery!
Very interesting...the third one scores high.....lovely
. Barefoot in the rain But beggars do not complain No rain means more pain................eloquent write by imagery,10++++++.......................thanks fo apprec8iation
The eventful Senryus written with so much pure images that are so close to the real life observation. Rain is always a joy that soaks through everyone's heart. Rain is indeed a healing beauty whether it be physical or emotional....
good collection...the third one i liked most...has real life more in it...10
The Rain Gods relent Opening the heavens flood gates To water the earth... tainGod is welcome onearth.. good write... read mine'Rian delay' andinflamed mind ...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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from watering the earth to a game...lovely the three of them