Rains 2 (Haiku) Poem by Sandra Martyres

a well scripted haiku.... short n sweet..

beautifully written haiku......10

yeah, saw it on the tv...life is full of nimiety! thnq for the haiku...

Rains #2 is a flawlessly written senryu which is absolutely beautifully conceived and expressed, Sandra. You have a great talent for these Japanese poetic forms. Carl.

Elegant and eloquent. What more could the doctor order? Great Haiku. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

You have so much skill with this form. I am not usually that into haiku but yours are among the best ever.

beautifullll. I love to be washed in the pouring rain

Where life continues to grow, under the glow of the lords smile....beautiful work Sandra 10++

beautiful beautiful haiku ma'm.....loved it...10

'watering the earth' would have made the imagery look more mystic...heaven/earth...but these are only after write suggestions...the original creative thinking to be admired...thanks...10