Quickie-Being Fat Poem by Loke Kok yee

Oh my God, i have never seen such type of cat (fat) ever before! You are engaged in discovering very strange funny things! Appreciate your poetic research in a specific direction dear poet! A little fun is always required to get rid of one's mundane life! Thanks for sharing...10

The cat becoming fat gives wonderful appearance to gain an amazing perception. Dogs are no longer threat. Wise humor is brilliantly expressed in this cleverly penned poem...10

again i pause to add 'my two cents'. There is so much fat, the fat cat would not feel even if a pack of rats were nibbling on his heel. As for dogs, this cat would have no need of fear, as no dog could drag it to elsewhere, far OR near! bri ;)

been here already. put the cat in the oven and call me when it's done! bri :)

I'm no cat, BUT i am a dog, and in my mirror i see a hog'. In youth i used to chase a rat: my younger brother; think of THAT! bri :)

Loke, i have never seen such a fat cat. Great rhyming! fat, cat, rat -threat. I am crowning you as the King of Rhymes as well. :) 100+++

This is indeed so lovely.... beautifully rhyming and very entertaining too! Your quickies, I admire most! 10+++++++++++++++++++++