Quickie-Bri Edwards Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Bri Edwards

Rating: 5.0


This quickie is written specially for Bri Edwards
Patiently he takes time to correct my works
Though at times it makes me feel awkward
But I’m grateful when he tells me the correct words

Quickie-Bri Edwards
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 17 October 2015

Bri can be a little caustic at times, always with a good heart full of intentions. I know how hard it can be to write in a second language. Just trying to accurately translate the thought let alone get the grammar, tense and spelling right. Advice from a native speaker is nice

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Loke Kok Yee 17 October 2015

I admire Bri for his sincerity and I value his comments, I love the humor in his poetry and I am one of his great fan. And also you Kelly! Thank you sir.

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Simone Inez Harriman 30 December 2017

I'm looking forward to Bri's comment on this one. I'm sure he will love it. Yes.... Bri has been wonderful with his lovely informative comments which are super interesting. Also Bri's comments have sometimes made me change my poetry when he points out grammar issues. Adore the picture accompanying your clever poem...10

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Loke Kok Yee 03 January 2018

Thanks Inez for your comment, Bri must have missed this one or else he would had his say!

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Melvina Germain 20 October 2015

I think it`s great to express how you feel and as far as critics go we can all learn a little more. I`m always thirsty for knowledge but as I tell my readers of my articles...Take what you can use and leave the rest...That`s precisely what I do..Candid poem, love it.....

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Valsa George 20 October 2015

Before the puffed up teacher..... we are all little frogs! Bri is a teacher to many! Long back I have accepted him as my great teacher!

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Well I wish Bri to read my work Suggest some corrections and tight the cork Awesome poem dedicated to Bri.......10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 17 October 2015

Bri is a great teacher, an outstanding critic and a lovely poet as well. When he gives his valuable time to poets like us, it's a matter of proud for us.

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Loke Kok Yee 18 October 2015

Absolutely true sir, you are correct in all aspects. Thank you

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