Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 12,233 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Puzzle - Poem by Amitava Sur

Puzzle:
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(Then) :
How can I assert you –
My loving sweet heart
That how much you’re closer to me
And how much do I love thee,
I was telling the same – number of times
I could not live or dream devoid of you.
You stopped me smilingly –with a kiss
That I don’t need this to tell you again

(Now) :
Leaving this earth, you proved me wrong
That without you even, I can live alone.
Oh’ my dear - Oh’ my love -
Now, though I agree that I was wrong
But now I’m dying every moment

Alone alone just I am alone
In this crowded earth without you
I am alone.
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Amitava (5.10.2013)


Comments about Puzzle by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 40,085 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/24/2014 2:15:00 AM)

    Being separated from the one you love is life's harshest lesson, it takes you from the one you love,
    yet increases your love in their absence, making you feel more intensely the pain of losing them.
    It is a vicious cycle, time moves us away slowly, yet the pain never dissipates and when remembered
    knocks us into an ocean of despair for a while. Death for those who are left behind is the cruelest
    side effect of true love, I think. Thank you again, Amitava for another beautiful poem, you leave a
    little of yourself with us in every poem. It is treasured in our hearts. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,655 Points Hazel Durham (10/21/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    So heartfelt with truth of the terrible pain of seperation!
    Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (10/11/2013 12:51:00 PM)

    love is eternal. it decreases with time like setting it on the back burner. but it never ends. nice ink (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,251 Points Patricia Grantham (10/9/2013 6:03:00 PM)

    Nicely written with love and admiration.The beauty of love
    does not go away. It merely fades with time. I have a poem
    titled If We Ever Meet Again. Please read when you have time.
    Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,962 Points Soulful Heart (10/8/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    the puzzle of separation indeed is harsh......................like life and death, love and separation seem to be two sides of a single........ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,467 Points Unwritten Soul (10/7/2013 10:00:00 PM)

    Because when love sealed the kiss to silent, it already read what you want to tell inside
    and
    Pain is a waiting moment, to mix all colorful happiness to be one light again...
    being far from all of them not mean we out of touch but it just amplify loudness what in heart more_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -2 Points Ibnu Din Assingkiri (10/6/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    in deed melancholy and represent expression from the bottom of heart. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (10/6/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    A very fine poem of love expressing the pain of separation. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,743 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/6/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    good love good write, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 8, 2014


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