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(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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Put to shame

Animal from inside
In rebellion to invade
But I keep it under control
Waits still for rebellious call

It may show its ugliness
With complete innocence on face
No one may come to know
As lust for hunt may any time grow

I do not know when it will turn
Into strict wild animal term
Forget about human relation
And inflict injury in question

Now I claim to be perfect gentleman
Worldly desires in deep corner still remain
God only known when will I turn animal again
I pray almighty to kill animal for not causing the pain

World may laugh at me for inhumanly act
If by bad luck red handed caught
“See this man who was considered pious”
“Put to shame from being famous”

Submitted: Thursday, October 10, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    Not something I could relate to...


    Ad Johnson3 minutes ago
    But quite well written.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    Superb sir


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha7 minutes ago
    Well said. Straight to the point whom you refer.
    Very elderly thinking.
    Poem came out of experience.
    Comment +1
    good flow

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    Ruth Courtney7 minutes ago
    good emotion famous good ending

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    eally nice


    rashidmukkum2 minutes ago
    Its a good poem, I do not know when it will turn
    Into strict wild animal term
    Forget about human relation
    And inflict injury in question these lines show us his skill as poet.
    Comment +1
    its fine

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    Zainab Qamer6 minutes ago
    very complicated i didntt understand but i think it has some deep meaning
    Comment +1
    uhh... what?

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    Stephen Gagne7 minutes ago
    Not English. This reads as if it were written by Andy Kaufmann's stereotypic foreign person, Latka Gravas

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Animal from inside
    In rebellion to invade

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