Poet Within 12/05/08 Poem by louis rams

Poet Within 12/05/08

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i give the lord possession of my soul for him to control.
for he is my inspiration and my guiding light
he is the one who gives me the sight.

to see the things in this life through word and deed.
and shows me the inner need.
to write my poetry so people can see
that he is the one in control of me.

my wife says it's an obssession which lasts into the night.
i say it's a passion that i continue to write.

now! can any one of you tell me which one is right.?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The feelings in this poem is awesome... I like this poem a lot you wrote this well Louis... ~Krista~

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Linda Winchell 09 December 2008

I would say Sir Louis, that it is your passion Sir. Sometimes we need to be reminded of the great potential we possess. We need someone to validate our likeness to the one who has created all things. To see God's image in us, just one little word of encouragament can make all the difference in the way we spend our days. This is one of those encouraging days for you Sir Louis! ! ! Bravo, that you are able to write what it is that could only come to all of us, through a higher power. Ten from me! ! ! ! God Bless, Linda

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