Poem Of Peace Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Poem Of Peace

Rating: 4.8


Eternal he is the peace ocean,
Peace comes here in motion.
Emotion draws the path right,
Devotion brings peace of light.

Promotion of mind sings song,
Music of peace takes us long.
Wrong sound does not touch,
Strong courage shines as much.

Clutch of peace is eternal pure,
Such moment comes of sure,
We all think of peace to gain,
See ever shines in cloud rain.

Pain goes away, peace appears,
Chain of love ties, sad disappears.
Cheers blossom and life shines,
Years of wait bring peace fines.

Lines of words we arrange here,
In vision watches dream a seer.
Zeal comes within inner heart,
Peal does awake for good chart.

Part of life is sure our devotion,
Peace dwells in action emotion.
Father of heaven is peace creator,
In clumsy path peace is our aviator.

Monday, January 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Peace Ocean is eternal in nature. In motion this comes here up to us. Due to presence of peace emotion draws the right path. Devotion only brings peace of light in life. Mind sings song while the promotion of devotion is seen. The music of peace takes us up to long in life realization. That is why wrong sound does not touch us. As much as strong courage shines always. To gain peace in life we all think. You all also see, in peace in cloud shines rain. Peace fines means clears our clumsiness and years of wait bring peace that is of course fine in life. We arrange here lines of words for peace only. A person with supernatural insights who well keeps in vision the future watches peace even in dream. Within inner heart zeal comes for peace. Ringing of bell of time does awake for good chart. Devotion is sure our part of life. In our action and emotion peace dwells. Father of heaven is the creator of peace. Peace is our pilot in clumsy path to recover us." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary: -
Seer-a person who sees something insight, supernatural insight who sees vision of future
Peal- a loud ringing of a bell or bells
Aviator- a pilot
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alesia Leach 15 February 2015

Beautiful imagery and peace is definitely what the world needs right now.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2015

A Beautiful poem on Peace, words flowing with peace, brings peace to our heart and thoughts. Beautiful message.... Part of life is sure our devotion, Peace dwells in action emotion. Father of heaven is peace creator, In clumsy path peace is our aviator. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 01 February 2015

Peace is what we crave in a strife ridden world! Peace comes from God and when men possess Godly qualities like love, tolerance, compassion, truth etc, peace fills their hearts! Great write, madam!

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Clarence Prince 02 February 2015

Father of heaven is peace creator. Thanks to God for peace! Blessings to you, Bhargabi!

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Swathi S Babu 02 February 2015

May eternal peace be granted To those who truly seek...... beautifully composed poetry thank you for sharing this ma'am

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2020

We need peace, God is the ocean of peace. If we believe in God and perform righteous work we can get peace.This is a brilliant poem on peace having impressive inscription. Thanks for sharing.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2019

I cite here your Poet's Note about the poem: Devotion is sure our part of life. In our action and emotion peace dwells. Father of heaven is the creator of peace...................Absolutely! A great treat to read this poem several times. True mesmerizing and profoundly created. God's Blessings be upon you and your beloved family. Amen!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2019

I have read this Poem Of Peace with greatest pleasure. Really a great treat to read this lovely poem. The great Poetess created this with the best end rhymes. Such a highest pleasure to read this time and again. Thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous poem. I have enjoyed a very lot. Captured so well the Peace we all long for. A 10 Full Score and myriad 10's more for this Peace. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon you and your beloved family..

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Robert Murray Smith 07 June 2018

O we wish all poems were so full of peace. That dove flies above all. A wonderfully crafted write.+++10 Robert

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2016

peace and devotion.. light, mind sings songs, ...... music of peace. realization of life, clear our clumsiness, dwell in supernatural insights and find joy in it. the craving of the inner heart and soul is always for a peaceful life..... very nice poem... you are really a role model for so many.........share this noble message of peace always... love your poem very much. tony

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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