Peace Movement Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Peace Movement
Let poets unite all over
Think coolly and offer
Their contribution for people
Who are waging just struggle
It is senseless
To snatch cheers from face
Make life miserable
And add endless troubles
It is biggest crime
And shame
To cause bloodshed
And openly lead
It is no crusade
But shadow
Of fear and tyranny
That may be disliked even by almighty
People too should be blamed
And condemned
For their blind following
In faith that helps atrocities and allowing
Unity may help to large extent
The national feeling should be present
Let people may belong to any faith or belief
The majority should always provide relief
"To die for stupid cause" is cowardice
Which religion is offering such promise?
That they will be looked after
When so much blood is spilled all over
If territory is cause
Let us sit over and pause
Think for while and come with peace settlement
The peace and only peace should be the movement
peace and only peace, only need here on this earth, thanks sir. Let poets of the world come together for this purpose.
Scattered and Disorganized Joshua Bowen11 minutes ago I believe the overall premise you were trying to convey is a good subject. However I think that the execution could have been more organized and clear. The poem is a little hard to follow and there are a few grammatical errors. Never stop Expressing Yourself Through Writing. Peace and Love.
Yes Mark Crawford11 minutes ago It could be a lot better as far as the technical side of things, goes. But I read poetry for the feeling, and this peace certainly possesses and presents its feeling. Very good. Comment +2
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Brilliant Eric Reels13 minutes ago Give peace a chance
Brilliant Eric Reels13 minutes ago Give peace a chance
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Let poets unite all over Think coolly and offer