Panoramic Frame! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Panoramic Frame!

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Time that stride where panorama abides
Viewed by different eyes yet the same things coincide.
Flawless tears praised the virtues of rain.
Clouds of thunderbolt shook the tree of pellets.
Summers steam had the whiff of hot spells.
Winter interlaced the dribbles into snow blanket.
Ripened days cropped up with distasteful appetite.
Spring just sprang up waking all desires.
Everything hangs in where vitality lay nested.
Picturesque ambience fills the bouquet in one frame
Yet eyes still searching for something and beyond.

© 2016 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights reserved

Friday, March 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: scenic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It was like designed to create a song mam, well written.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 March 2017

Thank you Vaidyanathan!

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Bharati Nayak 22 March 2017

Spring just sprang up waking all desires. Everything hangs in where vitality lay nested. - - - - - A wonderful write.Thank you for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 March 2017

Thank you Bharati!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2017

Summary of scenic beauty is interestingly drawn in this poem. Clouds of thunderbolt shook the tree of pellets. Rain come by virtue to this paradise. Spring has arrived with beautiful desires. An amazing composition is shared here. Revisiting this poem values more...10

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Khairul Ahsan 17 February 2019

Our minds swing with the change of seasons. Our eyes seek a beauty farther beyond they can see. 'Spring just sprang up waking all desires' - loved this line, a wonderful expression!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of scenic beauty. Thank you very much, Geetha.

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Susan Williams 21 June 2017

eyes still searching for something and beyond.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - now isn't that the truth? No matter how lovely the scenery right before us, our eyes soon begin to wander seeking further delights. No matter how lovely the house we live in our eyes wander toward another house down the street. No matter how good the job we hold, we gaze with envy at the job someone else holds. I think our panoramic frames can get us into big trouble! Love the way you handled this topic, Geetha.

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Nosheen Irfan 12 April 2017

A mesmerizing picture of spring. But yes, the heart yearns for something more. The insatiable hunger of the heart n soul of man takes us beyond this world, to the space n the moon.10

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Valsa George 07 April 2017

Beyond the frame, we look for something more! We are never satisfied with what we have already caught in our frame of vision and our quest after newer things continues without end! An insightful write!

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