I believe I see Pain
More than just what makes you cry
For when you are in pain,
You then can feel the agony of others
For when you are in pain,
You are more human, less wild
For when you are in pain,
You can nag God like never before
For when you are in pain,
You witness the process to reborn as precious gem
For when you are in pain,
It may ache, but your soul attains a rare peace
I have seen happiest of all being ignorant of God,
and worries faced by those around them
I have seen them thinking they will remain happy
forever
I have seen them broken facing pain,
a foe to them and friend to rare
And then I have seen those who take pain
as their closest ally
Their feet remain on the ground, but their
spirits reaching the seventh sky
It's a matter of belief that's
all I say
Happiness is no wholly good and
Pain is no fully bad to thy
Feeling the agony of others, humanness. Nagging God, being reborn as a gem, the soul attaining a rare peace, sadness as a closest ally spirits reaching high, matter of faith. These are the points i collected from your poem very nice poem, you have thought out a lot dear poetess. thank you for this poem. tony
Sadness is very precious for a poet. It depresses the pains towards subconscious and unconscious which saves the conscious from breakdown and generates a great poetry as a final product. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
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I would like to translate this poem
Such a brilliant write, Nayyab... a perfect 10++++