Pain Of Pleasure Poem by Alex Mars

Pain Of Pleasure

Rating: 4.8


What's this thought
This pain you've brought
Body torn apart inside
I've done all I can, I've tryed

The walls broke down
No ground is found
Beneath my feet the world is bare
No air is found, life is rare

For all I see
Is envy; greed
When all I want is taken away
Nothing left for me to say

I need this thought
This relief you've brought
Pain is lost
But at what cost...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I need this thought This relief you've brought Pain is lost But at what cost... so much sadness in poem. realistic views and praise worthy too...10 read mine hair n hustele, how are you and cry not with no separate ways...comment

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Patti Masterman 24 January 2009

Nice writing with lots of good imagery.

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