Outside The Tumbler! Poem by SALINI NAIR

Outside The Tumbler!

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Frills and fringes are defiant
That breaks norms on the way
Long run is still in the queue
There mud that wrinkle the lucid

Its mud that rest all the way
Tear the norms of emotions
That grabs the form of wisdom
To conquer the land ahead

Haste that controls its notions
Clarify terms on that voyage
That conquest the changes of motion
Later that mystic the turn to a gigantic

All forms that quill to eternity
That spills the randomness on queue
But the invasion was over
There fills the tides of calmness

Life fills grief in some turn
There fills the momentum of vagueness
But the flow turns to an island
There calmness is not an endeavor! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Saturday, October 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes river is muddy. Later its form is blue sea…different aspects………..like life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem with deep meaning. Very true said in few lines..... Frills and fringes are defiant That breaks norms on the way Long run is still in the queue There mud that wrinkle the lucid sometimes river is muddy, When its calm its clear and lucid....loved the imagery you used in this poem....

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 October 2014

Very insightful, aspects of life narrated very beautifully......phenomenal write.......I liked it

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2014

A very philosophic poem that appears as a chapter of a book of ethics. The straight path of eternity has many frills and fringes on each side of the road but behind the this beauty is a slope that leads to mud.

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