The yard was lively then
Feeble hands were shivering
Pale faces brisk and whisper
But the nervousness was in queue
Behind the scene its orphanage
Worst face of life in tune
Poverty is merriment for some
But the yard is parched forever
Deserted life is spurious
Fake faces are mischief
Without love life is worthless
Always whisper greed of love
But the latter skip always
It's a desert that eternal
Parched the land that splendid
But the clouds were in a swift
Here the shower is a need
But the yard is arid and scorching
To suck the drops of love forever! ! ! !
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved
The orphans always thirst for love! Though they may have a shelter, their minds are parched and they wait for the showers of love to cool their sweltering lives! You have nicely portrayed the emptiness of those who have no dear and near ones to love them!
A nice thought- - - - - -Showers of love are needed more in the yard of poverty but its orphanage! ...10
A passionate poem describing the emptiness amongst the orphans which is so penetrative. We all must stand by them for which they are at no fault.
Orphanage- removal of guardianship umbrella..we must love them..lovely so nice a reminder
Yes in arid land shower of love is needed to make it lively.......very nicely composed
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
drops the love for ever, thanks.