VIPINS PUTHOORAN


Orchad Of Love


My love will follow you like your shadow,
Until you stop swaying throu' the orchad
Of my chaste love without saying anything
Where you will feel my rubious heart;
As the blossoming of cherries
Where you will see my innocent smile;
As the elated petals of lillies
O my love, breathe in my redolent dreams,
O my love, wander in my celestial love,
Thirsting the elixir of my lonely heart.
Until my nectarell petals wither out

Submitted: Monday, January 09, 2012
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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  • Rookie - 246 Points Harindhar Reddy (2/13/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    Cheers! With your stellar expression you produced remarkable influence on with expressions like these. Great Metaphors run all over your poem.100/100 with remark Awesome!
    the blossoming of cherries
    like my rubious heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 308 Points Shahzia Batool (1/22/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    imagery is made with a grammar of love...beautiful adjectives + nouns: chaste love, rubious heart, elated petals of lillies, innocent smile, redolent dreams, celestial love...many poets do it but keats poems reflect this feature mostly...beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (1/19/2012 1:48:00 PM)

    Your poem's are as beautiful to read as to sit in a beautiful peaceful garden in the shade. I love the lines. Truly an amazing poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 929 Points Ken E Hall (1/12/2012 1:09:00 AM)

    Orchard of love perfect place to cast your shadow over her, top marks in the love game++++10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Rekha Mandagere (1/11/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    True love and devotion always commands and demands! Vipin, I really see a flash of thunder, lightning and pouring rain of heaven in your strong sentiments. Marks 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 694 Points Unwritten Soul (1/11/2012 5:15:00 AM)

    Siya smiles a lot and Ahmed enjoy with vip.in love hahaa...it so beautiful writing Vipins, it's like a orchard of rare orchids..you play word softly like the petals on your lips to keep them spoken vibrantly but gently..Nice and it awesome..high marks for u my friend :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Siyabonga a Nxumalo (1/11/2012 2:53:00 AM)

    where you will see,
    the elated petals of lillies
    like my innocent smile.....

    Wow! sahodhara, this is a superb poem, excellent..top marks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmed Khaled (1/10/2012 11:17:00 PM)

    so pure, so sweet, so simple and expressive, words chosen in this piece of beauty are living and lively besides they could say with ultimate confidence; here we are, here the beauty of being so pure and being so true and honest, come on, readers, come on bearing in mind that vipins is vip.in love and poetry, so greet him with your hearts and souls, , , all hearts with your pure heart, , , my brother
    AHMED KHALED (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,195 Points Dave Walker (1/10/2012 5:52:00 PM)

    So deep it can be nothing else but, real true love.
    An amazing poem my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajna Kailas (1/10/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    thirsting the elixir of my heart. How deep it is! eternal love by having the elixir of heart!
    dear poet, it is awesome creation. loved it a lotttttt!
    keep it up! (Report) Reply

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