Oops! Shoes Doesn’t Fit Her! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Oops! Shoes Doesn’t Fit Her!

Rating: 5.0


He loved one
Married next one
His parents were the happy ones.
He cheated everyone one.

His bride quiet different one.
Couldn't fit in shoe of his sweet heart one.
His sweetheart had a shoe slim fit one.
But his wife was just opposite one.
Now to fit her in his beloveds shoe
He crushed her with words
Shoe bites hurt her.
But forced her to swallow some diet made by self
Finally with each hurtful words
Surely made her so slim that the shoe
Turned out be loose one.
He changed the complete diet chart.
Her weight doubled.
Now he tuned diet chart again
Now slim fit she is.
But still she didn’t fit in that shoe.
This went on many years.

He met his beloved years later
She had put on good weight
And looked happy and different too.

Now again he came back home, he felt
His wife looked more beautiful than his beloved.
Now with a sweet smile
He said I regret for all those words
You lived the way I wanted
Now here after I will live the way you wanted!

She felt headlong in shoe bites
But now started loving the one who relieved her from such bites.

Darling if you don’t mind
I want to go to my love?
Fuming husband asked in boiling anger
Who the hell is he, more fit than me?
Wife in a pleasant voice said
the shopkeeper is the one
where you used to take me to buy fit shoes for me.
Oh! that guy who is as good as mosquito
Will fly away with just one blow of breeze.

Darling I am ready to fly with him...
LOL...

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

Please live how you want to live At the same time respect others life also. Philosophy nicely stated and humorously developed in the poem. Thank you.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 February 2014

The person in question did not know what he really wanted and thus he tries to fit his wife into his beloved shoes. A nice and serious poem with great humour.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 February 2014

The person in question did not know what he really wanted and thus he tries to fit his wife into his beloved shoes. A nice and serious poem with great humour.

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Tadasha Tripathy 28 February 2014

what I can say about this poem I don't know. Every day I am watching hundreds of such cases. it's the reality. I liked it very much.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 March 2014

Again an inspiring one with a good message..............Geetha..........live and let live with respective ideals........

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2014

Although it rarely happens in South Asia but it is common in most of the world. It's an interesting write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 March 2014

Wow...Dear Soul you are back. I am so happy.

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Unwritten Soul 26 March 2014

Hmm sounds like Cinderella has gained weight but she still a legendary princess! joking_SOul

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Dave Walker 11 March 2014

A great poem with a good story to it.

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Lyn Paul 03 March 2014

Great words Geetha. Those who treat others with no respect do lose out eventually. Thank You

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