Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,259 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Oops! Shoes Doesn’t Fit Her! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

He loved one
Married next one
His parents were the happy ones.
He cheated everyone one.

His bride quiet different one.
Couldn't fit in shoe of his sweet heart one.
His sweetheart had a shoe slim fit one.
But his wife was just opposite one.
Now to fit her in his beloveds shoe
He crushed her with words
Shoe bites hurt her.
But forced her to swallow some diet made by self
Finally with each hurtful words
Surely made her so slim that the shoe
Turned out be loose one.
He changed the complete diet chart.
Her weight doubled.
Now he tuned diet chart again
Now slim fit she is.
But still she didn’t fit in that shoe.
This went on many years.

He met his beloved years later
She had put on good weight
And looked happy and different too.

Now again he came back home, he felt
His wife looked more beautiful than his beloved.
Now with a sweet smile
He said I regret for all those words
You lived the way I wanted
Now here after I will live the way you wanted!

She felt headlong in shoe bites
But now started loving the one who relieved her from such bites.

Darling if you don’t mind
I want to go to my love?
Fuming husband asked in boiling anger
Who the hell is he, more fit than me?
Wife in a pleasant voice said
the shopkeeper is the one
where you used to take me to buy fit shoes for me.
Oh! that guy who is as good as mosquito
Will fly away with just one blow of breeze.

Darling I am ready to fly with him...
LOL...

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
©2014


Comments about Oops! Shoes Doesn’t Fit Her! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 37,638 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/6/2014 11:54:00 AM)

    Although it rarely happens in South Asia but it is common in most of the world. It's an interesting write. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (3/26/2014 1:01:00 PM)

    Wow...Dear Soul you are back. I am so happy. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (3/26/2014 12:45:00 PM)

    Hmm sounds like Cinderella has gained weight but she still a legendary princess! joking_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,930 Points Dave Walker (3/11/2014 7:54:00 AM)

    A great poem with a good story to it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,155 Points Lyn Paul (3/3/2014 12:17:00 AM)

    Great words Geetha. Those who treat others with no respect do lose out eventually. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,999 Points Neela Nath Das (3/2/2014 9:08:00 PM)

    A true picture of our society.You depicted it very well.Hubbies must learn a lesson from the character you penned here.Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,818 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (3/1/2014 9:40:00 AM)

    Again an inspiring one with a good message..............Geetha..........live and let live with respective ideals........ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 585 Points Silvi Tripathy (2/28/2014 7:31:00 PM)

    what I can say about this poem I don't know. Every day I am watching hundreds of such cases. it's the reality.
    I liked it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,556 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/27/2014 9:20:00 PM)

    The person in question did not know what he really wanted and thus he tries to fit his wife into his beloved shoes. A nice and serious poem with great humour. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,556 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/27/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    The person in question did not know what he really wanted and thus he tries to fit his wife into his beloved shoes. A nice and serious poem with great humour. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,965 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/27/2014 7:28:00 PM)

    Please live how you want to live
    At the same time respect others life also.
    Philosophy nicely stated and humorously developed in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,572 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/27/2014 7:20:00 AM)

    love love love, I want to go with my love, but not with lust, here it is to remember. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 1, 2014


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