Adeline Foster

Veteran Poet - 1,466 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.on The Horns Of The Moon - Poem by Adeline Foster

.On The Horns Of THe Moon

I cannot live in bitter dungeons
In the caverns of your heart
Where roam the flying creatures
Of javelin and dart.

I shall wrap my cloak about me
As the nightside tempests start
In those halls of bitter dungeons,
In the caverns of your heart.

Comments about .on The Horns Of The Moon by Adeline Foster

  • Gold Star - 5,236 Points Patricia Grantham (7/14/2013 6:47:00 PM)

    Who can know the heart with it's dark and secretive
    contents? Until the heart can become a place wherein
    lies love, peace, grace and mercy then there will be room
    for many to come in and enjoy it. Lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 189 Points Terry O'leary (5/15/2013 3:01:00 PM)

    I'm re-reading your poem at your request... it is well worth re-reading... as I said before - fantastic imagery! Terry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (3/7/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    A fine succinct write with good use of the bracketed repeated line at beginning and end for emphasis and poetic effect. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,459 Points Louis Borgo (12/30/2012 5:40:00 PM)

    you told me to read this piece the word choice woah i would like to hear more on this poem it seem incomplete? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (11/28/2012 5:05:00 PM)

    Adeline, I adore this piece... the title is captivating...exquisite!
    The words pull me as the moon pulls the ocean tides. Outstanding Write! ! ! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jennifer Kay Simmons (10/12/2012 6:04:00 AM)

    well penned.. pain is a part of life, suffering is by choice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 189 Points Terry O'leary (8/16/2012 5:09:00 PM)

    Wonderful... fine imagery... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,930 Points Dave Walker (8/12/2012 4:20:00 PM)

    So so good, a fantastic poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,866 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/27/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    Neat! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/26/2011 2:21:00 PM)

    'Tis an amazin' Poem! ! top marks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Michelle Freeman (10/17/2011 9:21:00 PM)

    wow, wow, i like it alot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (7/30/2011 1:30:00 AM)

    Nice work and wide vision from the caverns.......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (11/24/2008 12:05:00 PM)

    loved it, 'specially the repeated lines and ominous feel. -chuck (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 105 Points Linda Ori (10/25/2008 2:47:00 PM)

    Definitely not a warm-hearted poem. Vivid imagery here - painful, cold and bitter.
    Depressingly superb!
    Linda :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 25, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, July 24, 2015

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