Old Pond Poem by spiritual seeker

Old Pond

Rating: 5.0


Old pond has dried,
Frogs lay waiting in soft mud,
Hot sun.. cloudless sky.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
India is now experiencing a long dry spell. Wells and rivers are dry. Precious water, A thirsty dying man will exchange his whole worldly property just for a cup of water!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 08 July 2012

This is very good. Open for so many interpretations I think this is really top class poetry, my friend

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 July 2012

so sad, spiritual seeker. Our country India has rich water sources, still the problem can not be solved and we are like the frogs, croaking without any benefits...Only three lines, but has so much of meaning..Well done!

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 22 June 2012

old pond dried old thoughts merged up frogs lay in soft mud innocence still in comforts hot sun, cloudless sky hope no avail let old pond wet in rains anew! !

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