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A Little House We Build Together


We had build this dream house of ours,
A little house under the clouds,
with beautiful garden and trees,
and five little stars shining above.

I had never complain along the way,
My tears only flow not because of sadness,
But seeing the five bright stars play above,
Twinkling beautifully, to our utmost happiness.

I had tasted the heat of fire but kept my smiles,
Seen droplets of tears fell like rain from your eyes,
As we know there is no perfect sky,
Even in full moonlight, dark clouds do come for a while.

The day will soon come for me to leave,
Pray our five bright stars will continue to give,
For the spirit and love of this little house,
Be a blessing for all…a gift from the sky.

Submitted: Saturday, November 26, 2011
Edited: Sunday, November 27, 2011

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  • Rookie Jason Atkinson (7/5/2013 7:36:00 PM)

    Very nice poem, I've read it a few times. Had to leave a comment. I invite you to read Mine as well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (5/14/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    You are a true family man and lucky enough to have a supporting, lovely family members too. All should be blessed by divine with such a little beautiful house. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,953 Points Walterrean Salley (6/14/2012 10:56:00 PM)

    The day will soon come for me to leave,
    Pray our five bright stars will continue to give,
    For the spirit and love of this little house,
    Be a blessing for all…a gift from the sky.

    A poem of humility, love and sacrifice. Blessings to your little dream house, and may your five little stars ever shine bright. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,549 Points Hans Vr (11/27/2011 3:28:00 AM)

    Wow, really moving. Fantastic verses expressing with great images the strength and harmony of family. I love the poem very much. (Report) Reply

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