Ode To A Solitary Mind - 2 Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Ode To A Solitary Mind - 2

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</>Oh mind what is that magnitude
attracting you always to solitude
without any sort of gratitude
for the goodness of the world.
with solitude when you campaign
with it's effects like the champagne
you fell and think of the orgies,
That teach you ungreatfulness
for the world with some goodness,
It, thus, dipicts your hollowness.

Solitude makes melancholy to you
Driving the mirth from you away
Deprieving you of the worldly joys
You get nothing though you grieve.
Lonely and binding yourself in a trance
Of solitude you forgo the chance
To give goodness & get it in return
From the world in your turn
from the society into spiteful
Aloofness which is too painful.

Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2018

This is a beautiful poem that speaks of a mind that is attracted to solitude. Solitude is truly melancholic as it drives away the joy of giving and contributing to this world. Wonderfully rhyming with words of wisdom.........10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 December 2018

Solitude makes melancholy to you Driving the mirth from you away Deprieving you of the worldly joys You get nothing though you grieve......so touching and true. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Full vote.10

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Sonali Ganguly 30 March 2016

wow. every human being in one way or the other get cloven with solitude..... resulting in melancholic mood

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 March 2016

What is that magnitude? ! Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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