P H O E N I X ;L I B E R A T E D Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

P H O E N I X ;L I B E R A T E D

Rating: 5.0


The tale tell marks of beauty spots
In devastation caused by cyclones
Knocks on our imagination
Forcing revisiting it in visualization.

Massacre and havoc by the pandemic
Shattered human pride and self esteem.
Self confidence and his prudence
Bode good bye, dipping him in gloom.

Let almighty inspire His off spring,
Reviving his desire and confidence,
To come out once more from ashes
Of depression just like a phoenix.

The phoenix with human emotions,
Enjoying life in it's stride in paucity
And all colors enriching humanity,
Liberated from slavery of materialism.


Poet and copyright @Ratnakar D Mandlik.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ongoing recurrence of devastating cyclones in different parts of the world and the pandemic covid terrifying mankind may be teaching some lessons to human beings.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 June 2020

Indeed these devastating occurrences all over the world are meant to teach humanity some profound lessons! If we are able to change, we can rise like phoenix from this gloom! Powerful write! A 10

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 June 2020

Great imagery and eloquence are contained in the lines of this gem, with keen insights and wisdom to be shared.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2020

" Let almighty inspire His off spring" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 03 April 2021

Well articuated and nicely penned with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind.

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The phoenix with human emotions, Enjoying life in it's stride in paucity And all colors enriching humanity, Liberated from slavery of materialism Yes, Let us wish for a golden day when the phoenix will rise with all qualities of humanity

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Bharati Nayak 11 June 2020

The phoenix with human emotions, Enjoying life in it's stride in paucity And all colors enriching humanity, Liberated from slavery of materialism. - - - - A great poem in the context of the pandemic Covid and the cyclonic storms that have caused massive destruction to life and properties in various parts of the world.

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Susan Williams 11 June 2020

Let almighty inspire His off spring, / Reviving his desire and confidence, / To come out once more from ashes / Of depression just like a phoenix.- - - Amen! We need God's help to get through these times. As He has often gotten us through the deadly times. 10+

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 June 2020

A powerful and insightful poem with compelling imagery. The numerous natural calamities coupled with the great pandemic can be viewed as signs against a war torn world. I concur with the great Poetess Valsa ' s comments.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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