Ode To A Solitary Mind Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Ode To A Solitary Mind

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</>Oh poor solitary mind
What food you in solitude find
To think over and to encoil
Your dwarfness which is real
Into the effigi of greatness
Falsely thought to be yours.
Then you deceive sincerely
To thyself in origin holy.
And you believe with certainty
You are good and world is silly.

Look at the sunrays all over
Arose from one Sun but they cover
The world by his emittinng power.
Smell the scent of a flower
Hidden in leaves but it still appears
With smell upto you oh dear.
Though variously we appear
We are fragments of oneness
.So dear leave your loneliness
And mix in milieu with happiness.

Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik

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Though variously we appear We are fragments of oneness .So dear leave your loneliness And mix in milieu with happiness. Ratnakar ji, very thoughtfully and beautifully written in this poem. We have to realise that we are a minute part of the whole.......10

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Sonali Ganguly 30 March 2016

its a wonderful message sir. bit loneliness is the viral disease which has spread rapidly in this century. finding the antidote i.e- happiness is a tough task to do...

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Your dwarfness which is real! Nice work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 December 2015

Look at the sunrays all over Arose from one Sun but they cover The world. Smell the scent of a flower Hidden in leaves but it still appears With smell upto you oh dear. Though variously we appear We are fragments of oneness .So dear leave your loneliness And mix in milieu with happiness. A great suggestion to a reader to get away from loneliness and remain happy. very nice comparison of the sun and its rays spreading and the scent of the rose. thank you very much. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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