Not That One Can'T Change Ones Mind......[following A Breakup; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Not That One Can'T Change Ones Mind......[following A Breakup; Short]

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I guess first step is to ascertain
if it's true what I did once entertain.
I've thrown evidence out,
but did not some cards "shout"
your love for me? … Or am I insane?


(Feb.2006)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i assume i was thinking of my last girlfriend; the one before my present lovely wife came along.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 04 January 2018

I guess first step is to ascertain if it's true what I did once entertain. I've thrown evidence out, but did not some cards shout your love for me? … Or am I insane? yes, enjoyed it very much, ++++++++++ 10

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Muzahidul Reza 04 January 2018

An excellent limerick, ........ but did not some cards shout your love for me? … Or am I insane? very interesting, thanks for sharing

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Simone Inez Harriman 09 April 2017

I think people deserve one another so it seems that it is a big blessing in disguise when things don't work out with a previous partner. Especially when soon after, one meets the love of your life.

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