Not Easy Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Not Easy

Rating: 4.7


What to remember and what to forget
Only you go near and beget
Eyes slowly raise level and meet
Head simply shakes and crumbles the feet

To deceive somebody is not at all art
You may prove intelligent and look smart
Days may not be far when you have to part
Let love grow not fast as train but as cart

Memory may not be rubbed of fade
Not easy to say bye and farewell bade
Sand may not witness what we promised
Life may reveal what actually we missed

It did not struck to my ailing mind
Love may prove eternal and kind
Will take me to the depth of sensation
New waves with high sense of elation

Nothing stops me from going to nature
Why should I worry for uncertain future?
Is this love a phenomena or disease to cure?
Can any one tell he is likely to succeed for sure?

I hold my breath in disbelief and prayed
Roses all over as if fragrance is sprayed
Nothing wrong in love as message conveyed
I shall greet the waves and not feel dismayed

Love emanates from inner consciousness
Unite in spirit with love and belongingness
What is wrong if we couldn’t make in the end?
Is it not the true feelings from the friend?

Love and not hate will reign supreme
Not to be taken as goal or aim prime
We are here to love and to be loved
Not to be discouraged or slightly moved

Let our memory stay for while
Let people not greet us with smile
If you walk with me for extra mile
I shall content with ……………………..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 07 November 2009

I shall greet the waves and not feel dismayed ........................................................... Thank you for this nice inspiring line..It deeply touched me, you have lifted up my soul..and yes..I will greet the waves, no matter what

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 08 November 2009

you deserve to stay so long in the top 500 poets

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Louis Rams 08 November 2009

love will reign supreme. a ten

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

nothing stops me from going to nature.man you're so wonderful

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 November 2009

‘…Let love grow not fast as train but as cart…’ What starts fast ends in blast. LOL! Love is not soda water bottle, effervescently sprouting up to end in short lived and disappearing as ‘cold’ bubble lees. Ten++ niv Please grace with your comments &c to my posts [new too] niv

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bye bye... bye bye 14 December 2009

'... we are here to love and to be loved... ' Says it all... But who said it would be easy? (smile)

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Sunita Rao 11 December 2009

What to remember and what to forget Only you go near and beget Eyes slowly raise level and meet Head simply shakes and crumbles the feet

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george george 30 November 2009

Interesting poem to read. I especially like 'What is wrong if we couldn’t make in the end? Is it not the true feelings from the friend? ' A different take on love! Very good.

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Merna Ibrahim 29 November 2009

Simply Superb. This verse is really meaningful'To deceive somebody is not at all art'. Merna

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warner treuter 25 November 2009

love for awhile.......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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