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hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 18,891 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No need to tell


I love to be loved
In fact firmly believed
It never occurred in mind
How much I had loved of that kind?

It was no miracle
Neither had I any trouble
Nor had misunderstanding or problem
The thought had come out from stem

You were symbol of great beauty
Not of shape or color granted by almighty
But of calm nature and straight forwardness
The brightness appeared too on your face

So there was no need to tell
Everything went perfectly well
It was never in question or doubt
But certainly shrouded with mystery and talked about

It is not the beautiful body alone that I talk
But distance of many more miles I may have to walk
This made me firm in my belief
You too consented and provided relief

I think mutual feeling is must
Anything that was to be done with trust
Life is wide open before us
It only needed zeal and thrust

I claimed on many occasion
That there was absolutely no confusion
I was to wed a person of my choice
That was the only way to fulfill promise

Let stars and moon may not stand as witness
Yet I may move on and readily face
All kind of challenges that may lay on the way
I have the option to take you on shore anyway

Submitted: Sunday, March 17, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 18,891 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    Sabbani Laxminarayana 'All kind of challenges that may lay on the way
    I have the option to take you on shore anyway'. I like your poetry.
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  • Gold Star - 18,891 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 7:38:00 PM)

    2 people like this.

    Sin Cere Omg....this is...beauty...
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  • Gold Star - 18,891 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 6:43:00 AM)

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  • Gold Star - 18,891 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    P() () j@, so nice sir, , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

    Faisal Lakhani excellent dear..

    JANO IBRAHIM ? Nice thanks for sharing

    I felt very happy to read it. What a great expression! Padmavathi, Secunderabad Mar 18,2013 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,891 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 6:39:00 AM)

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    Re: No need to tell (Score: 1) by induce on Sunday, March 17,2013 (03: 41: 17) Jadia, was there an elope? Your line: 'Let stars and moon may not stand as witness' The 'may not' leaves me wondering. induce

    Beautiful sharmagh aghabeigi6 hours ago I loved it. Amazing.
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