New Mountains Poem by David Harris

New Mountains

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Each day I climb new mountains
in the struggle for life.
Sometimes my limbs get weary
and I want to give, but I have to go on.
Giving up would mean losing
everything my life was meant for.
Therefore, I must struggle
never giving my body a rest.
I must climb these new mountains
or I am doomed forever more.
There is no turning back once started,
as it doesn’t work that way.
Each day there is a new mountains
that gets bigger with each day
and we must reach the summit by nightfall
or get stuck on the mountain going nowhere.
The harder we climb,
the higher we get
until we reach
the pinnacle of our dreams.


8 November 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 08 November 2009

Great poem and I loved Carol's comment. Wish I could find a way to minimize some of the 'mountains'; but then again, I would not want to 'dumb down' life, lol.

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Fay Slimm 08 November 2009

You are right David - -life offers us new mountains to climb every day - - a meaningful poem....10 from Fay

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Carol Gall 08 November 2009

great write some days those mountains seem bigger 10

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Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

Very good David, , But than highly our mountains, falling downwards, painful there is more... / with a smile / All the best, Tsira

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