Nature's Course Poem by Manonton Dalan

Nature's Course

Rating: 5.0


rough edges of river banks
before my eyes, gauges
once a fiery push passed
shaking loose rocks; mud
withstand all but bruises
sign of resistance to might

water is low now as grass
gently flowing in semi-arc
where dragon flies dips
lay their eggs on stalks
fries swim chasing shadows
filling their mouth as they go


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ena N. Mori 08 May 2011

i see it! how about 2000 in a few months?

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 May 2011

Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Manonton Dalan

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virginia, usa
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