Nature's Best Poem by Hazel Durham

Nature's Best

Rating: 4.4


Playing with the dolphin of the deep, dark mystery that is the ocean,
Freedom is more then just a notion,
Waves crashing onto the waiting shore the tide always in constant motion,
Her lover's smile reminds her of the dolphin jumping for joy

Across the cold waters of the elusive ocean, like her favourite toy
And the ocean's eerie roar is like her lover shouting her name,
Across the beach as she is standing out of his reach,
Like she is a celebrity of some fame,


He has discovered her exuberance cannot be tamed,
She is like a child of the swirling mists and unruly ocean,
That fights for her right to love,
Like the thundering waves trying to kiss,

The angry skies above,
She walks hand in hand with her love,
Barefoot along the wet, cold sand,
Nature's force is at it's best on sea and land,

Connecting her heart to the elements,
The truth is like an important letter sent,
About her raw emotions as powerful as the waves,
Surging with passion,

As their fire ignites
The flames of a never-ending love,
Like the certainty of the ever-changing skies above,
Embracing as the winds force caresses their now ageing vulnerability,

By the ocean they feel great agility,
With the supreme power of nature's best,
Making their younger years more defined,
As they look to the west,

At the setting of the sun
Their flame is still a flame,
With no blame
For their past mistakes,

Just a truth that is part of nature's best
Their love is a passion that doesn't forsake,
But bestows the gift of loving that is their lifelong zest.

Thursday, June 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Pregnant with a passion that blazes and burns with the fires of strong intimacy! Well done my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2015

A well written and nicely described beauty, oceans and dolphins, nature's display of beauty.

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Lyn Paul 07 June 2015

The ocean is my favourite place watching the sunset it gives great answers to all..Natures Best.... truths. Beautiful words always from your pen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2015

Nice depiction. Groovy collocation. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Sekharan Pookkat 07 June 2015

sea and seashore, ocean and wind tide and waves are always a big canvas for the poets of love who connects life and literature.

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Muzahidul Reza 31 August 2017

At the setting of the sun Their flame is still a flame, With no blame For their past mistakes, our good deeds remove our past mistakes, we should recognised, great written,10

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Chinedu Dike 27 January 2017

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Hazel.

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Mizzy ........ 07 September 2016

Really lovely Nature/Love collaboration Hazel, nicely merged into a poem throbbing with love. My favourite verse...... Connecting her heart to the elements, The truth is like an important letter sent, About her raw emotions as powerful as the waves, Surging with passion,

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 May 2016

A lovely aestival and romantic poem. As always, the imagery is absolutely beautiful!

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Clarence Prince 21 August 2015

Their flame is still aflame With no blame For their past mistakes I can just about imagine the loves shared! Nice job, Hazel!

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