My Suit Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

My Suit

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My suit

Do not know how old was
-when Noruz had neared
-few days was remained
-then would be New Year
-Equinox, seasons' change
-bye to cold of winter
-hello to spring and green
-blossoms on trees

Everyone had purchased
-new shoes, new suits
-but not me

It was late afternoon
-came Mahmood
-my second brother from top
-in times he did replace our father
-fast pedalled on his bike,
-I sat as the cargo far behind
-did not talk but could see
-many shops, ready suits,
-it was Bab-Homayun

I tried many till finally
-One of them was approved
-he paid and I picked and
-back again to his shop
-restarted my work
-sold crops to yoghurt

That suit will only die
-with album and I gone
-I never will forget
-its photo is with me
-Round-shaved-head
-I had to since I was
-student in school
-possibly fifth grade

I was, am, understand
-hardship and poverty…

Wednesday, March 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poverty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nika Mcguin 08 March 2017

Wow, This poem reads more like a page in a skillfully written book! As a matter of fact, this could be published easily. I love that this poem tells us just a little sliver of your story and yet, that sliver somehow sums up the whole. It is a saddening, heavy ending. But for that, it is all the more touching. Magnificent write.~

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Nassy Fesharaki 27 March 2017

Nika dear, my apologies for late reply and appreciations for reading and such a brilliant comment.

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