sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.
My Monstrous Friend
Nassy “My monstrous friend” Halloween! Where are my shoes, my backpack and my umbrella? I must go! I must go to Salar Uyuni I must go to Kon and to Pachakamack. To be, a dead goat in that lake To be salt, under rake