My Memories Of You Poem by Pacific Hernandez

My Memories Of You

Rating: 5.0


My memories of you, like waves keep coming back
Add torment and torture onto my troubled mind
The bitter memories drip down and touch the sores
That you left in my heart, and make them bleed the more

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2019

ADDITION: I cite your first line here: My memories of you, like waves keep coming back. EXCELLENT metaphor used. Thank you for sharing this brilliant poem. Though very sad and full of melancholy, an excellent read, I must admit. God's Blessings in Abundance. Amen

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2019

Not really a pleasant experience to have these memories, especially of the one you love most. Excellent poem in brevity. I enjoyed reading the melancholic lovely words. A 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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