My Love Story Poem by Xelam Kan™

My Love Story

Rating: 5.0


Wanna listen my story;
Though attempted by many a time
but its charm has never declined.
A story that will melt your heart
as it is full of melancholic thoughts.
Mind! Not just hear these rhymes
but feel what it reveals onto your heart sublime.
I was blessed
In love with a sweet gentle fairy
Well versed and gracious and best for marry.
As sacred as a holy shrine, but
she was ignorant of a Valentine.
Her rosy lips and dimples' bright
and hazel eyes sparkle like stars at night,
Chasing the sun she all day long
And sung some lovely songs.
Thus passing days, months and years
Full of love, in fun and cheers,
And then turned Heaven His holy writ
distress and bereft
Forlorn as Keats, Romeo and Tess;
The rainbow of my love got eclipsed
Before blossom got buried that lovely bride
Sans HER grace, the world looks dull and dried.
Nothing seems important to me, any more
but to grace my love with her rhymes four.

Tuesday, November 6, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: fairytale
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
plz read then my other poem ' Scared Fairy'
that will works as a flashback
and do share what you feel....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 06 November 2012

What a beautiful and poignant story with such a sad end. I love your style of writing in this poem you have opened your heart with such raw honesty. Brilliant and inspired write! !

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The Reader 06 November 2012

A good sad and gentle write -the occasional rhyme-pattern shows that it is a well-knit composition-the impact is created-thank you for sharing it-

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Valerie Dohren 06 November 2012

Beautiful poetry, poignant and sad.

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oh my god. I got shivers, that was bueatifal and what a twist! so sad in the end but it did not stop how beautifal it was. thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 07 November 2012

Such an amazing grace, poetic expression in lines...beautiful and beautiful...well done Gulsher! _Soul

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Babatunde Aremu 21 November 2012

At the onset of this poem, the poet had psycological satisfaction. He was love- motivated in the begining but reclused to delusion at the end. Love could motvate or cause internal disequilibrum. Everyone have this experience this from time to time. Good poem.

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Hamid Negah 14 November 2012

very nice poem...i love to read like this more.

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First I felt envious of you for your being the writer of this poem! Next I felt proud of you for your being truly a lover of all times. Beneath the stars and the moon on this land of mystery this love has to bloom ever and lovers like you must tell such tales.. A good write Gulsher John.

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Aminath Neena Haneef 10 November 2012

This is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading this!

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Asif Andalib 08 November 2012

Beautiful write sir. I enjoyed reading it a lot

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